Video games can be bad and good depends how you look at it. Video games can be good because they entertain you and keep your kids less annoying.Video games let you make new friends and interact with the same friends you already know possibly class mates online. they give you something to do on a rainy day and they give you something to do when your friends are away.Video games can be bad though because they can keep you away from making new friends in the un video game world.Video games can also be bad cause eventually they can damage your eye sight especially if you don't like carrots. Video games can take up too much electricity and money. video games these days can effect the way younger children think especaily the voilent games.
By: Aaron .V
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You have the ability to be a great writer, but you need to work on editing skills. The reader wants to be able to focus on the message, not the grammar mistakes. Overall good job!
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